[I wrote this a year before I graduated modeled after Robert Gluck's "Jack the Modernist." The language is a bit overwrought, but that was intended. I also used this piece to explore postmodern desire. Elizabeth Grosz's "Space, Time, and Perversion: Essays on the Politics of Bodies" also heavily influenced me. This is part of a series.]
A few days later I meet up with Jane at a bar, with the rest of the other metallic insects. I have work early the next morning, in about 4 hours from now, but I don’t care. Touch and proximity are the goals at hand. While I try to focus on this destination, I can’t help but feel exposed, as if all of them have seen longing glances, have read on dirty bathroom stall walls the lyrical epic of my unfolding. I try to play it off cool by just sitting next to Jane, not talking really, just joking with the rest of the chain-smoking aphids. My peripheral is working overtime, developing such a fine-tuned depth perception that would make a body builder blush.
Jane’s hand moves to my thigh and rests there. Beneath the table. She is holding me. My heart starts racing. My laughs at the jokes become louder, desperately trying to appear more casual, concealing in overdrive. Her hand moves further up my thigh and it is all warmth. I am on the brink of a soft moan but instead I just say “stop.”
Jane withdraws her hand immediately and apologizes. Like a boy who has gone too far, has made the girl feel uncomfortable and disrespected. I want to tell her this is not the case, that more than anything I don’t want her to stop, that I want her to explore every aspect of my body. But that is too many words to convey at the moment.
Jane: I have to go to the bathroom.
I get out of the booth, waiting for her to get out. She brushes up against me.
Jane: You can join if you want.
Normally I detest going to the bathroom in groups, to me it is too private, too personal. But I follow, stumbling, like a small child who has no other option. The bathroom is downstairs and near deserted in this bar. We talk and kiss, but no, she is not coming home with me.
I walk back to my cold car with a mixture of dejection and hope. I decide that hope wins tonight and instead daydream of her in my bed. My soft comforters envelop us both, and the streetlamps illuminate her body. She is sleeping, and the light is reflecting off her breasts. The light travels across her breathing body in a way that looks more like a reflection of an infinity symbol rather than skin. To this image I fall asleep, in the company of dreams.
Edit: After revisiting this piece, I realize that the ending is pretty weak. I'm also not a fan of the opening sentences in Part I. I think I met my goal of exploring a postmodern idea of romance, but I still find this piece lacking. Heavy editing is in order.
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Sunday, April 17, 2011
Friday, April 15, 2011
Jane the Modernist: Part III
[I wrote this a year before I graduated modeled after Robert Gluck's "Jack the Modernist." The language is a bit overwrought, but that was intended. I also used this piece to explore postmodern desire. Elizabeth Grosz's "Space, Time, and Perversion: Essays on the Politics of Bodies" also heavily influenced me. This is part of a series.]
It will not be until later, after my feelings for her have developed, do I realize that the repetition of me losing my lesbian virginity wasn’t just dirty talk—that she was in effect anointing me. But instead of fragrant oil and milk poured over my head, I get iron and carbon. She is churning me with her tongue, fingers, twisting me into a helix of steel and wire. I am pliable in her hands, and she smoothes me out until I am more metal than flesh, measured more in tensile strength than in heartbeats and respiration. I am a steel cable and she has attached me to her protruding left hip bone. In the awkward silence that follows (I defend myself later to Amy: “What loss of virginity isn’t awkward, doesn’t italicize the lack of skill and dexterity?”) I feel myself being pulled upward, but I can’t see by what. We are moving past telephone poles and streetlamps, past building tops and a murder of crows, past airplanes until we finally enter the stratosphere. This region is filled with a warm, glowing light that reflects our bodies to look luminous and shining. In this aura of incandescent bodies I can see that we were pulled up by the other chords connected to Jane. These chords are girls I know: Julie, Lucy, Jill, Allison, Katie, Diane, Amy, Ashley and Nancy. All of them are interconnected, floating in this space, and beyond the horizon is a blur of bodies, girls who I have never seen before but are still connected to these girls I know. Sometimes, the light catches the chords and instead of looking sturdy and unbreakable they appear gossamer and thin, as if the wind could break these bonds at any moment. Jane calls this The Web. I tell her I don’t want to see her as a spider, but I secretly wonder if there is any other way.
But perhaps I am sugarcoating this; perhaps I am making this too diaphanous and doing a disservice to my story by employing this metaphor. Let’s try something with a little more grounding:
Jane is fucking/has fucked Lucy, Jill, and Katie. Lucy was fucking Julie until her ex-girlfriend Katie found out, who also wanted to fuck Julie. But instead of fucking Julie, she started fucking Jane. Lucy stopped fucking around with Jane when Jill started fucking Jane, as Jill is, quote, “such a nice girl.” Katie used to fuck Allison, who in turn used to fuck Nancy but is now fucking Amy. Nancy used to fuck Jill but is now fucking Ashley. And Ashley used to fuck Julie, as well as Diane.
Lauren: I didn’t sign up for this.
My roommate Matt laughs at this and says, “That’s what lesbians do, they get into incestuous drama.”
I think he is over generalizing and when he notes my raised eyebrow he adds, “Gay men do the same thing but the difference is that we don’t really care who’s slept with whom. I’ve been with guys who’ve been with Tom, Jason or Chad. I just don’t care.”
Lauren: I don’t care who she’s been with in the past, I just want her to be with me.
He shrugs at this, a what-can-you-do? And what can I do?
It will not be until later, after my feelings for her have developed, do I realize that the repetition of me losing my lesbian virginity wasn’t just dirty talk—that she was in effect anointing me. But instead of fragrant oil and milk poured over my head, I get iron and carbon. She is churning me with her tongue, fingers, twisting me into a helix of steel and wire. I am pliable in her hands, and she smoothes me out until I am more metal than flesh, measured more in tensile strength than in heartbeats and respiration. I am a steel cable and she has attached me to her protruding left hip bone. In the awkward silence that follows (I defend myself later to Amy: “What loss of virginity isn’t awkward, doesn’t italicize the lack of skill and dexterity?”) I feel myself being pulled upward, but I can’t see by what. We are moving past telephone poles and streetlamps, past building tops and a murder of crows, past airplanes until we finally enter the stratosphere. This region is filled with a warm, glowing light that reflects our bodies to look luminous and shining. In this aura of incandescent bodies I can see that we were pulled up by the other chords connected to Jane. These chords are girls I know: Julie, Lucy, Jill, Allison, Katie, Diane, Amy, Ashley and Nancy. All of them are interconnected, floating in this space, and beyond the horizon is a blur of bodies, girls who I have never seen before but are still connected to these girls I know. Sometimes, the light catches the chords and instead of looking sturdy and unbreakable they appear gossamer and thin, as if the wind could break these bonds at any moment. Jane calls this The Web. I tell her I don’t want to see her as a spider, but I secretly wonder if there is any other way.
But perhaps I am sugarcoating this; perhaps I am making this too diaphanous and doing a disservice to my story by employing this metaphor. Let’s try something with a little more grounding:
Jane is fucking/has fucked Lucy, Jill, and Katie. Lucy was fucking Julie until her ex-girlfriend Katie found out, who also wanted to fuck Julie. But instead of fucking Julie, she started fucking Jane. Lucy stopped fucking around with Jane when Jill started fucking Jane, as Jill is, quote, “such a nice girl.” Katie used to fuck Allison, who in turn used to fuck Nancy but is now fucking Amy. Nancy used to fuck Jill but is now fucking Ashley. And Ashley used to fuck Julie, as well as Diane.
Lauren: I didn’t sign up for this.
My roommate Matt laughs at this and says, “That’s what lesbians do, they get into incestuous drama.”
I think he is over generalizing and when he notes my raised eyebrow he adds, “Gay men do the same thing but the difference is that we don’t really care who’s slept with whom. I’ve been with guys who’ve been with Tom, Jason or Chad. I just don’t care.”
Lauren: I don’t care who she’s been with in the past, I just want her to be with me.
He shrugs at this, a what-can-you-do? And what can I do?
Wednesday, April 13, 2011
Jane the Modernist: Part II
[I wrote this a year before I graduated modeled after Robert Gluck's "Jack the Modernist." The language is a bit overwrought, but that was intended. I also used this piece to explore postmodern desire. Elizabeth Grosz's "Space, Time, and Perversion: Essays on the Politics of Bodies" also heavily influenced me. This is part of a series.]
Lauren: I had a dream last night.
JANE: What do straight girls dream of?
Lauren: I dreamt that my brother was watching me take a piss on a toilet atop of a building. He had to use the bathroom, and he wouldn’t leave me alone. I just wanted some fucking privacy. He is angry and predatory. When I realize that my yelling isn’t working I start punching him in the stomach and jaw. I run to my father who for some reason is already yelling at me. I explain to him this is the third time I dreamed it, that it is not my fault. Then suddenly, my father’s face gets redder and redder and he is screaming so loud the entire campus can hear—he asks me—ARE YOU QUEER?
Jane: We’re not even dating yet, are you sure you want to come out? Besides, you’re a straight
girl. (She gives me a wink and undoes the top button of my pants)
Lauren: That’s not the point, my dad would never use a the word “queer”
Jane: He’s a republican, he’s your dad. (Her hands travel lower, and I am on the verge of un-remembering. But I persist; there is a point to be made.) That's not bashing, not his vitriolic use of "queer"--my dream dad meant the theory, the umbrella term of ambiguity. May dad doesn't know that, all he knows is "dyke" (JANE's tongue is now down my throat. Despite this, I have developed an ability to keep talking.)
Look, sexuality in itself is not transgressive (I raise my fist) it can't be out of the norms because it is all within the spectrum of human sexuality. Being gay, or bi, or pan-sexual (she loves it when I give my theoretical shout-out to the trans community...as much as a butch lesbian can. She shows me this by penetrating me with her fingers) is only defined as difference just because we live in a hetro-normative phallocentric society.
JANE: I'm not into three-somes
Lauren: Did I say "phallocentric?" I suppose that works but (I finally move my had from her hip down to her stomach, my fingers are starting to warm from this heat.) maybe I should have just said "patriarchal"--similar but different. Just like us.
She says nothing to this--I want this to be because she is unimpressed with the idea that lesbianism lubricates so well because it is rooted in sameness. But if I draw my mind/tongue back from her nipples, I realize this just because I read it somewhere. Some kind of feminist philosopher I read was unimpressed with the idea so I figured I should be unimpressed with it too. I am projecting but Jane doesn't know this. She is whispering to me breathily, fogging my mind and the windows simultaneously. “You’re fucking a girl for the first time.” She repeats this over and over, I think to cement this action, but I’m not sure. Perhaps she’s insecure that I want to be doing this. I try to tell myself that romance is overrated anyway, that it’s better to just abandon myself sensation now. I do this in hopes of romance later. (This is how I will explain it to Amy the next day.)
My attention turns to Jane's body: short, and curly Irish hair, and a small, hard body. Full of muscles, acquired through a lifetime of spending her time on a soccer field, it serves the dual purpose of turning me on and highlighting the differences in our own bodies. I tell myself that I shouldn’t fetishize her body—but this is a new lust: its nature is to straddle a dusky, faint line between a cult of worship and distant eroticized object. “Erotic” sounds terribly demeaning to me though, as if I were trying to pigeonhole her skin into some cheap paperback romance novel. But how else can I describe the terrible sexuality she exudes, but as one that not only excites but elicits a harmony of joyous, ecstatic melancholy? She is my Calamity Jane, my appropriated muse, my colonized femme fatale.
Lauren: I had a dream last night.
JANE: What do straight girls dream of?
Lauren: I dreamt that my brother was watching me take a piss on a toilet atop of a building. He had to use the bathroom, and he wouldn’t leave me alone. I just wanted some fucking privacy. He is angry and predatory. When I realize that my yelling isn’t working I start punching him in the stomach and jaw. I run to my father who for some reason is already yelling at me. I explain to him this is the third time I dreamed it, that it is not my fault. Then suddenly, my father’s face gets redder and redder and he is screaming so loud the entire campus can hear—he asks me—ARE YOU QUEER?
Jane: We’re not even dating yet, are you sure you want to come out? Besides, you’re a straight
girl. (She gives me a wink and undoes the top button of my pants)
Lauren: That’s not the point, my dad would never use a the word “queer”
Jane: He’s a republican, he’s your dad. (Her hands travel lower, and I am on the verge of un-remembering. But I persist; there is a point to be made.) That's not bashing, not his vitriolic use of "queer"--my dream dad meant the theory, the umbrella term of ambiguity. May dad doesn't know that, all he knows is "dyke" (JANE's tongue is now down my throat. Despite this, I have developed an ability to keep talking.)
Look, sexuality in itself is not transgressive (I raise my fist) it can't be out of the norms because it is all within the spectrum of human sexuality. Being gay, or bi, or pan-sexual (she loves it when I give my theoretical shout-out to the trans community...as much as a butch lesbian can. She shows me this by penetrating me with her fingers) is only defined as difference just because we live in a hetro-normative phallocentric society.
JANE: I'm not into three-somes
Lauren: Did I say "phallocentric?" I suppose that works but (I finally move my had from her hip down to her stomach, my fingers are starting to warm from this heat.) maybe I should have just said "patriarchal"--similar but different. Just like us.
She says nothing to this--I want this to be because she is unimpressed with the idea that lesbianism lubricates so well because it is rooted in sameness. But if I draw my mind/tongue back from her nipples, I realize this just because I read it somewhere. Some kind of feminist philosopher I read was unimpressed with the idea so I figured I should be unimpressed with it too. I am projecting but Jane doesn't know this. She is whispering to me breathily, fogging my mind and the windows simultaneously. “You’re fucking a girl for the first time.” She repeats this over and over, I think to cement this action, but I’m not sure. Perhaps she’s insecure that I want to be doing this. I try to tell myself that romance is overrated anyway, that it’s better to just abandon myself sensation now. I do this in hopes of romance later. (This is how I will explain it to Amy the next day.)
My attention turns to Jane's body: short, and curly Irish hair, and a small, hard body. Full of muscles, acquired through a lifetime of spending her time on a soccer field, it serves the dual purpose of turning me on and highlighting the differences in our own bodies. I tell myself that I shouldn’t fetishize her body—but this is a new lust: its nature is to straddle a dusky, faint line between a cult of worship and distant eroticized object. “Erotic” sounds terribly demeaning to me though, as if I were trying to pigeonhole her skin into some cheap paperback romance novel. But how else can I describe the terrible sexuality she exudes, but as one that not only excites but elicits a harmony of joyous, ecstatic melancholy? She is my Calamity Jane, my appropriated muse, my colonized femme fatale.
Jane the Modernist: Part I
[I wrote this a year before I graduated modeled after Robert Gluck's "Jack the Modernist." The language is a bit overwrought, but that was intended. I also used this piece to explore postmodern desire. Elizabeth Grosz's "Space, Time, and Perversion: Essays on the Politics of Bodies" also heavily influenced me. This is part of a series.]
Further exploration is at hand, I sense—perhaps an exit from my current liminal state, but I guess whatever this voyage produces; most likely it will be a graduation to another plane-less arena. I am in my early 20s; could it be any other way? I’m not searching for stability, per se, but more of a fixed center around which events orbit. It’s not regression to the child—the I, I, I center of the universe—it is grounded in my desire to have my rococo be more than just ornamental stutter. To have the peaceful Zen at being at the center of the shell, (“the eye of the storm?” she offers, I say, “I never really like snow globes anyway”), while still being orbited by dips and crags and spires—all of which, when taken in a whole, produce a dazzling effect. My life is in the peripheral, unable to fully grasp the enormity (but I am in my early 20’s, I say, hubris marks my generation) Barely, just barely I climb through the labyrinth, looking for an axis, retreating, marching, a stuttering dotted line.
My latest arch to traverse will be her body. Have I intersected with her surfaces, ran my hands over the cloth boarders of some new, exotic land? Only minimally, I reply. In language I find my prejudice: “his” vs. “her.” His is “is”, the forward state of declarative existing, of puffed chest and “I’m ready” erect cock. Her is the “er”, a stuttering imposed upon me by my naivete, the unknown, the constant apologizing—can I touch? caress? She answers me by putting her hands, arms on my hips.
This new love/lust is like seeing an old man buying flowers in a grocery store. It has the same profound joyous melancholy. (I want her to argue it's more "ecstatic" than "joyous", but this is just wishful thinking.) Same body, different vein. Whereas the new lover is like a cannon ball straight to the jugular, causing your chest cavity feel completely empty and aware, the old man is a transfusion to the arm. It passes its way around the body, simultaneously warming and cooling until it diffuses into the stomach where it then becomes black tar. We get drunk off this syrup--hurriedly wondering about your own mortality, our own momento mori. How far can we live in a day-to-day basis? I ask the old man, do you, in all your years of experience think that language can take us beyond a few blooms?
"Only when its uttered in sincerity," he says.
"Isn't everything I say sincere? I'm in my early 20s."
"Hubris," she reminds me.
My hand rolls up to her collarbone, her neck, and feels the scruff of newly cut hair. Our mouths meet in such a way that says yes, but I reply, can I? She slides her hand up my shirt and stops at my navel. She is surprised it is pierced. I tell her I am surprised it is pierced most of the time too. It is part of my history—I hope that she will discover through time. It’s the history that comes with being more than a one-night stand—but how could she not call after I bend my neck and sigh in such a way when I kiss her? How could she not see the complete longing in my eyes in this car, in this dimly lit parking lot? I hope the street lights will illuminate this a little. But, I tell myself, men have failed to see it in the soft glow of my bedside table, how could this be different?
Further exploration is at hand, I sense—perhaps an exit from my current liminal state, but I guess whatever this voyage produces; most likely it will be a graduation to another plane-less arena. I am in my early 20s; could it be any other way? I’m not searching for stability, per se, but more of a fixed center around which events orbit. It’s not regression to the child—the I, I, I center of the universe—it is grounded in my desire to have my rococo be more than just ornamental stutter. To have the peaceful Zen at being at the center of the shell, (“the eye of the storm?” she offers, I say, “I never really like snow globes anyway”), while still being orbited by dips and crags and spires—all of which, when taken in a whole, produce a dazzling effect. My life is in the peripheral, unable to fully grasp the enormity (but I am in my early 20’s, I say, hubris marks my generation) Barely, just barely I climb through the labyrinth, looking for an axis, retreating, marching, a stuttering dotted line.
My latest arch to traverse will be her body. Have I intersected with her surfaces, ran my hands over the cloth boarders of some new, exotic land? Only minimally, I reply. In language I find my prejudice: “his” vs. “her.” His is “is”, the forward state of declarative existing, of puffed chest and “I’m ready” erect cock. Her is the “er”, a stuttering imposed upon me by my naivete, the unknown, the constant apologizing—can I touch? caress? She answers me by putting her hands, arms on my hips.
This new love/lust is like seeing an old man buying flowers in a grocery store. It has the same profound joyous melancholy. (I want her to argue it's more "ecstatic" than "joyous", but this is just wishful thinking.) Same body, different vein. Whereas the new lover is like a cannon ball straight to the jugular, causing your chest cavity feel completely empty and aware, the old man is a transfusion to the arm. It passes its way around the body, simultaneously warming and cooling until it diffuses into the stomach where it then becomes black tar. We get drunk off this syrup--hurriedly wondering about your own mortality, our own momento mori. How far can we live in a day-to-day basis? I ask the old man, do you, in all your years of experience think that language can take us beyond a few blooms?
"Only when its uttered in sincerity," he says.
"Isn't everything I say sincere? I'm in my early 20s."
"Hubris," she reminds me.
My hand rolls up to her collarbone, her neck, and feels the scruff of newly cut hair. Our mouths meet in such a way that says yes, but I reply, can I? She slides her hand up my shirt and stops at my navel. She is surprised it is pierced. I tell her I am surprised it is pierced most of the time too. It is part of my history—I hope that she will discover through time. It’s the history that comes with being more than a one-night stand—but how could she not call after I bend my neck and sigh in such a way when I kiss her? How could she not see the complete longing in my eyes in this car, in this dimly lit parking lot? I hope the street lights will illuminate this a little. But, I tell myself, men have failed to see it in the soft glow of my bedside table, how could this be different?
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